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I hate having nightmares, don’t you? Good thing we don’t have to deal with them like fifteen-year-old Melissa does because she is caught up in a whirlwind of her nightmares as they become reality. She discovers someone that looks like a ghost is hiding counterfeit money in coffins in the field across the street from her house; and to top it off her mom has a connection.
Dreams, Ghosts, AND Coffins is a Young Adult suspense novel with a twist of history. The word count is 58,900.
I have read several of your books like ….., ….., and …… and I feel mine would fit right in with this genera. (Okay, is this sentence a yea or a nay?)
Thank you for your time and look forward to hear from you soon.
Jeanette S. Andersen
I feel the second sentence is a bit to long and needs to be shortened or reworded. Comments? Thanks.