Great info

Rachelle Gardner is always posting helpful information. Thank you for keeping us informed, Rachelle. Your the best.

 How to Tighten Your Manuscript

This is one of her comments.

(For example, in the previous sentence, I’d cut the words “simply” and “anyway,” and I might even cut “significantly.” The writing is cleaner and I’m down by three words.) 

http://www.rachellegardner.com/2013/10/14786how-to-tighten-your-manuscript/

Go take a look.