Saturday, March 2, 2013

Dreams, Ghosts. & Coffins. 

Fifteen year old Melissa is caught up in a whirlwind of good and bad when her nightmares become reality.  She finds out someone is hiding counterfeit money in coffins in the field across the street from her house, and to her dismay, somehow her mom is connected.


  1. Yep. this is good. What about the word, 'burring' though? Is there a better word like, smuggling? What does burring mean anyway? Wouldn't want any of your readers thinking the same thing.

    Overall good job!

    Oh, one more thing. Is whirlwind one word or two?

  2. I see what you mean. I changed it and people know coffins belong underground. Thanks.

  3. Replies
    1. Thank you Sharla. I'm seeing if this will grab some attention.

  4. Hi Jeanette! I just found out you and I are both on Shannon's team of Warriors/Minions for the A-Z Challenge and wanted to say hello. I'm so glad to have found your blog, I really like your writing. This post definitely caught my interest. Great to meet you! :)

    1. Hi Julie. Thank you for the comments and glad to meet you too.